Saturday, February 05, 2005

Here's a draft I've been working on...

Last Word

This is not that kind of phone call
Calls that end in anxious
Bottoms on barstools
Last call “No we’re set”
Rum breath and you
Just can’t stop staring at
Collected moisture on my bottom lip

4 comments:

. . .misterjim said...

it's a good start w/the call paraell you're developing. . .dig

nightgrapefruit said...

Are you replacing writing group with your blog?

Bibbilicious said...

awww, never.

Anonymous said...

i like this one. nicely done.